My opinions so far..

An aspect of our sequence which I think works well is the shot of Bryn running through the fields. This splits up the other shots, which are mostly close ups, and adds variety to the sequence. It is also visually very different to the other shots, as we mainly focus on the forensic side of the murder, not anything to do with the murder itself.

An aspect of our sequence which needs developing is the editing of our shots. We need to edit the shots together with decent shot lengths and a variety of shot types together. This is the main area which needs developing in our sequence, as the shots themselves are quite strong, it's just the editing together which will create a successful sequence.