Feedback on Rough Cut

1. How would you describe what happens in the sequence?
- High tempo/A lot happens in a short amount of time

2. Who are the characters?
- Not sure, as they aren't introduced yet

3. What do you imagine the film is about?
- Murders/forensic/teenage attack?

4. What questions do you still have?
- It is still unclear who is who and what the film is really about.

5. In what ways could the sequence be clearer?
- The running shot could have been made clearer?

6. What is the mood atmosphere created?
- Panicky/confused

7. What other film/tv show does it remind you of?
- CSI/Texas Chainsaw Massacre

8. How does the music create atmosphere?
- Individually the separate parts create a tense atmosphere, but all together there are too many changes

9. Give an example of effective editing/lighting/framing/special effects that contribute to the style.
- The running shot because it is different from the rest and gives a feeling of desperation.

10. What single image is most striking and why?
- Hand next to the number 4 sign because it is the first real bit of horror/gore, and the number implies that the death is one of many, and it makes the audience start to ask questions.

11. Give an example of an effective use of the following elements:
- Prop/settings - The shed
- Costumes - The forensic team costumes
- Performance - The forensic team

12. What is an area of improvement?
- The running scene needs to be cut shorter.